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Amalia Lantano
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You remind me of all my failures
When I see you, I see all my insecurities
My insecurities and failures are like butterflies
Your eyes show each butterflies

I tried to get away
But you always show the way
I tried to hide it
But you were always there to find it

Smiles I give are nothing
Success that I made are lacking
Mistakes are always seen
You play it to my mind like a movie scene
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