As Time Passes

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As Time Passes

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I once had it all
Riches, love, and anything I wanted
I could get anything with just a simple call

But as time passed I realized
That maybe life isn't about what you have
As time passes I see that I've been living a lie
Holding on to what I once had
To fill the hole of my losses
As time passes I realize
I'm broken
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Nice lay of words for a common reflection of life.
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