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Women
Posted: 02 Jul 2020, 01:05
by Dayodiola
A being, fragile in composition, tough in character.
The beauty of existence to most.
Needed by all for great moments.
Though they satisfy all, how can they be satisfied?
Their existence is our joy.
Our existence is their complement.
Re: Women
Posted: 02 Jul 2020, 09:29
by victoriasimons
A really thoughtful piece, I love the sentiment. One small thing though, should 'complement' be 'compliment'?
Re: Women
Posted: 02 Jul 2020, 12:19
by Samwisekoop
A very thought-provoking poem. Well done!
Re: Women
Posted: 13 Jul 2020, 07:33
by Titin Jane Florence
Beautiful piece but I believe there is still a lot to be explored
Re: Women
Posted: 16 Jul 2020, 16:08
by Dayodiola
victoriasimons wrote: ↑02 Jul 2020, 09:29
A really thoughtful piece, I love the sentiment. One small thing though, should 'complement' be 'compliment'?
Women 'complement' in the sense that they add extra features and light to men life. Thanks for the suggestion