My Moon

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Amalia Lantano
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Sparkling in the sky
Like a star
Swiftly moving in the air
Gently gives me a gentle breeze

Voice that can lift my soul
Smile that breathes happiness
Sparkling eyes that gives me hope
Face that makes you swoon

Like the stars in the sky
You are far from my reach
So far to see
But gives light for me to see
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Oh. Moon you wre the source of providing us light in darkness of night, although you are far away from us, says the poet by appreciating the traits of moons but on the side, depressed on the point that it,s far away from earth. Good traits of mmon like it provides a kind of peace to the poet
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Faisal611 wrote: ↑08 Aug 2020, 03:27 Oh. Moon you wre the source of providing us light in darkness of night, although you are far away from us, says the poet by appreciating the traits of moons but on the side, depressed on the point that it,s far away from earth. Good traits of mmon like it provides a kind of peace to the poet
That is one way to interpret it. 😁😁
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