Heart break
- Ekiosa
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Heart break
Planted solely with the purest intention.
Blooming each day, it's flowers were so beautiful.
Then with time it started to fade,
It needed something else.
Though I searched for the Boost,
Still couldn't get it at the moment.
As time went by,I watched helplessly
as our tree withered away
And you moved to another field
The one with a fertile ground
As I stare each day in disbelief
I ask myself,why do others love tree
Flourish without it
And ours didn't?
Surely,the Boost makes the love tree more safe,
You weren't patient enough
hope I get it someday.
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I think on the line below remove the "And"
"You moved to another field"
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I like how you used nature as a metaphor for the nature of love.
Nice job!
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