Cloudy on a Full Moon

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Pamela Bianca Mas
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Cloudy on a Full Moon

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I was looking forward to seeing you whole
A dash of your beam and a taste of your soul
But you were concealed by the cruel clouds above
So I have to wait another full cycle for you, my love.

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For those like me who only get to see someone special
at a given time and has to wait weeks for the next.
Hang in there, our time will come ❤️
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A love poem for the moon? Amazing! The idea of a love story with the moon in a symbolic sense has me wishing for more.
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This is so, so beautiful! This has to be all selenophiles' favorite poem!
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Astrid H wrote: ↑08 Sep 2020, 06:39 A love poem for the moon? Amazing! The idea of a love story with the moon in a symbolic sense has me wishing for more.
Thank you for your encouraging response! ❤️ I appreciate it and I will continue to write! 😊
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bush reads wrote: ↑15 Sep 2020, 08:25 This is so, so beautiful! This has to be all selenophiles' favorite poem!
Hi, I find the moon very inspiring! 🌕
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Pamela Bianca Mas wrote: ↑15 Sep 2020, 10:02
Astrid H wrote: ↑08 Sep 2020, 06:39 A love poem for the moon? Amazing! The idea of a love story with the moon in a symbolic sense has me wishing for more.
Thank you for your encouraging response! ❤️ I appreciate it and I will continue to write! 😊
Looking forward to more of your work!
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That's very good.
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Maria8297 wrote: ↑01 Oct 2020, 00:16 That's very good.
Thank you! ❤️
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I am so in love with the moon! This brought a smile to my face and warmth to my heart. I know this feeling so well. Thank you for putting it into beautiful words!
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Cazablah wrote: ↑06 Oct 2020, 13:21 I am so in love with the moon! This brought a smile to my face and warmth to my heart. I know this feeling so well. Thank you for putting it into beautiful words!
Thank you for your appreciation. It means a lot to me. 🥰❤️
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