Blood Ties

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Amalia Lantano
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Blood Ties

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Sever the ties
Kill the lies
Trapped like a mice
Smashed like pies

Set me free from this pittfall
Tried to climb, only to fall
Crawled like insect to call
Deaf to all my call

Lift myself, for you to destroy
Treated me like a playtoy
Release me from your ties
Relieve me of your lies
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I could picture a cat playing with words like your poem! Great work!
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Astrid H wrote: ↑08 Sep 2020, 06:41 I could picture a cat playing with words like your poem! Great work!
Thank you for appreciating my work. 😊
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Amalia Lantano wrote: ↑22 Aug 2020, 22:52 Sever the ties
Kill the lies
Trapped like a mice
Smashed like pies

Set me free from this pittfall
Tried to climb, only to fall
Crawled like insect to call
Deaf to all my call

Lift myself, for you to destroy
Treated me like a playtoy
Release me from your ties
Relieve me of your lies
Thanks a lot for your great sharing.
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Your welcome! Thank you for taking your time in reading it.
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