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Promise

Posted: 28 Aug 2020, 04:05
by Fathima Hamza
I do warn you
My darling
Never promise
And never believe a promise
Don't blame people
Situation changes
Everything fades out
And so life changes
So never make a promise
I swear
You can't keep them
They mean to be a burden
At some point of life
And I warn you always
Never carry them in your bags.

Re: Promise

Posted: 08 Sep 2020, 06:37
by Astrid H
I enjoyed reading your poem! It’s sort of playful in a way, even though it’s melancholic too. Very interesting!