So Close, Yet So Far.

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Cardhold3rJok3r
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So Close, Yet So Far.

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When I look into your eyes I see nothing but an amazing girl behind.
She's been hurt, abused, mistreated and used.
I wish these guys would stop being confused before they lose something great, what's worse is causing all these girls to self hate
I want to change it all before it's too late; but these vile, evil guys ruined it all before I could put one foot through that gate.
Good guys finish last?
That phrase is too worn because the only thing we finish with is a heart that's torn.
Is it too late to rewind, go back to the right place, right time, the one moment to talk to her face to face before some other loser wins that race?
I'm trying to save her before she fades;
Please, please don't pick up that razor blade...
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Heavy words to compliment a burden of emotions. Your words shout for themselves.
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