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We stayed far from each other.
I stayed in town.
He stayed in the outskirts.
We would talk for hours a day.
We would visit each other sometimes.
It felt so good; refreshing.
Then, we moved closer.
We lived in the same house.
It was three days and three nights after moving in together.
Then, I saw him in that position;
The position I was when we stayed far from each other;
Under my blanket, murmuring words to him that sounded like the humming of bees.
I saw him in that same position I was; he was humming words but I wasn't on the other side of the call.
It was to someone else not me.
The painful part was that I couldn't complain, it was not even cheating.
You were just in that same position I was when I was falling for you.....
Should I be scared? Should I......


*Love and its sides

Love is a mage... It can wound and heal hearts at the same time. Good poem! You should write more!!

Veena_Balakrishnan wrote: ↑11 Jan 2021, 03:18 Love is a mage... It can wound and heal hearts at the same time. Good poem! You should write more!!

Thank You

So sad... Its clear the persona was into the man only to be disappointed that the man was into another when they were close enough. The persona is helpless as she says she can't complain.
I always read your pieces and they are wonderful. Would you mind a Pm? I would like to connect with you, perhaps I can also learn from you

John Owen wrote: ↑16 Apr 2021, 02:23 So sad... Its clear the persona was into the man only to be disappointed that the man was into another when they were close enough. The persona is helpless as she says she can't complain.
I always read your pieces and they are wonderful. Would you mind a Pm? I would like to connect with you, perhaps I can also learn from you

Thank You for your comment.
It's okay. I don't mind a Pm.

Abigail09 wrote: ↑16 Apr 2021, 12:32

John Owen wrote: ↑16 Apr 2021, 02:23 So sad... Its clear the persona was into the man only to be disappointed that the man was into another when they were close enough. The persona is helpless as she says she can't complain.
I always read your pieces and they are wonderful. Would you mind a Pm? I would like to connect with you, perhaps I can also learn from you

Thank You for your comment.
It's okay. I don't mind a Pm.

Hello John,
I got your message and I have been trying to reply for some minutes now. I keep getting the notification that 'I am not authorized to send private messages'. I don't know why. So, yes. I got your message .