What Grace Means to Me

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Re: What Grace Means to Me

Post by Charity Hlabe 1 »

A beautiful poem indeed I just wish:

1. I wish the name of the poem was repeated on the poem itself and maybe indicate who/what gives this grace

2. Your body is your temple that is not true your body is God's temple
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Post by David Falama »

It was interesting meaningful but some words are not meant to be there
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Post by David Falama »

It was interesting meaningful but some words are not meant to be there
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Scott,
You never stop amazing me. You probably wrote this in an afternoon while it would have taken me weeks or months. It is very good and I am going to save it to read more than once.
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Post by KAMVALETHU MSINDO »

Impressive teaches us to fight for more and desire more without hurting those around you and that greed can lead a person astray
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Post by Leena Poysti »

Very good thoughts to reflect. Thank you.
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Post by ChabbieCee »

THE POEM SPOKE TO ME IN EVERY SENTENCE WHAT AN INSPIRING PIECE OF WRITING. i LOVED IT FROM START TO FINISH.
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Post by Shivakshi Manyal »

It's really a heart touching poem teaching us what actually grace is.....i really enjoyed reading it appreciate the thought and creativity of the author. I highly recommend it to all read it. It's an amazing poem. "To be kind not dishonest", really heart touching line.
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Post by Cherry Ann Siarot »

The poem really speaks the way of life. Its telling us how to have a balance outlook in life as we move forward. I really love this piece.
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Post by Lindiwe Hlamapi »

This poem comes off as a class tutorial. It doesn't touch an audiences emotion as should poems. The writer is emphasizing more on explaining the words of the poem making it too structured
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Post by Susan Jones Young »

I believe finding peace and balance in life is very important. I especially love the very last line because indeed tomorrow is promised to no-one. Thanks for sharing
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Post by Cleophas Maiyo »

The poem tries to explain how life should be well lived, one should be led by morals,passion and wisdom.
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Post by Nerline Pierre »

Absolutely stunning, the words speaks so much volume about life itself, very heart warming and encouraging.
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Nice poem, the writer talked about the facts about life principles
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Post by Diana Amoabea Addison »

The poem is really nice. This poem is realistic pointing out how one is to live and be not living others lives but a life worth pleasing to yourself and God. It actually points out how we live and as well how we should live and it speaks of me in a case where I am out in between celebrating ones victory or disliking it or wearing with life battles and still maintaining inner peace and strength to pull through. The poem is indeed insightful.
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