What Grace Means to Me

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Darla Nolberto
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Re: What Grace Means to Me

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:techie-studyingbrown: I love it, for it speak of self ^⁠_⁠^
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Post by Patricia Anderson 10 »

This is a very thoughtful poem. If only we could all live by your words.
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Post by Pauline Njiru 1 »

Such a beautiful, uplifting poem with a lovely flow that is simple to understand. Well done.
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Post by Mercy Olarewaju »

Grace is who I am/become as a result of my choices. Choosing life is the best choice. I have been tremendously enlightened by your poem, Scott. Thank you for sharing.
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Post by ADEDAYO KADRI »

Great advice 😎
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The poem addresses the arrogant personality and reveals many of his weaknesses. It is a call for self-repair and improvement.
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Charlotte Watson
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Post by Charlotte Watson »

Looks like a great amount vthought went into this list. Very interesting but doent seem like a poem.
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Post by Gila Berlin »

It is beautiful. This poem will speak each time I read it. I believe that I will come away with more sensitivity and insight after each reading.
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Post by Carla Krasovec »

I appreciate the comparison and the ability to strike balance. I enjoyed your thought provoking poem. :)
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Post by Trina West »

JazzyQ. So true
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Post by Leonard Amadi »

I think the work is quite inspiring, insightful and its a call for us all as humans to draw strength from the very silent and usually untapped power, that lies deep inside. kudos1
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Post by Margaret Kumalo »

A very Good Poem, resonate with me very much. I can very much relate to it, although it confused me when it said " To treat your flesh as a temple, but not your true self".
Probably it should be: To be true to yourself and treat your flesh as a temple.

Otherwise awesome material.
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Post by Idoya Elosua »

it is very clarifying, it demonstrates the fine line that separates the virtue that we must pursue with its antagonism, always taking the positive that helps us to be better human beings every day without losing the essence
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Post by Liz Martinez 1 »

I really enjoy this poem. It’s wry encouraging a lot of what it says. I think it speaks about a lot of things we all think but are to afraid to face.
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Post by Nicoleta K »

It’s a heartwarming poem,I love it, the amount of thoughtful but simple words in it are making it amazing
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