What Grace Means to Me

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Renha Coutinho
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Very nice poem. Very narative how to go on in life, In one sentence I can say its a poem which shows how live a piece full life when we are still alive.
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Monia Tirellel
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Post by Monia Tirellel »

I love it, it is very expressive of a person who has found himself
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karen mcmillen
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Post by karen mcmillen »

Grace
I have always loved that word but never felt I
achieved the compliment
I want all my children to read and understand this
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Post by Edith Rodriguez 4 »

Love it, spoke what thee unspoken can't speak...I love how in depth you when to bring those truth to the light..really thoughtful with your words.. tha k u for sharing..
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Post by Karla Larmore »

The poem’s points are good, however Grace is the unmerited favor extended to us by God. There was no mention of that which was disappointing.
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Post by Rachel Granger »

Well spoken sounds that it came straight from life experiences, those are the best poems when they come from the heart. I trust it will inspire readers, it has me. Thanks
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Post by Mona Blessy »

The poem tells us how we should look at the world even if we have some insecurity like pain or fear. Same way we should have inner peace and start things new at anytime before it's too late. It's a graceful poem.
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Post by Karen Williams 18 »

It was written good and it touched me real good I liked it keep up the good work
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Post by Shemeka Visor »

The end of this poem "To choose to turn your life around before it is too late and there is no life left to turn around." Spoke to me. As a society we work and work and work and at the end some of us leave behind a legacy or store to pass down while others have nothing but meaningless objects. Grace is how one lives and remember, in my opinion.
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Lisa Lewis 14
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Post by Lisa Lewis 14 »

Very beautiful.
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Sampson Onyinyeachi
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Post by Sampson Onyinyeachi »

It's nice and beautiful well penned.This poem captures the peace the elegance the grace and the balance between determination and acceptance
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Post by sulaimon balogun »

I like it. A good and thoughtful one
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Post by Pimporn Chandee1 »

A great deal can be learnt from your poem. Thank you very much.
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Tasha Kuhar
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Post by Tasha Kuhar »

Grace means just about everything that you just enumerated.
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Ericka Hobbs
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Post by Ericka Hobbs »

I enjoyed your poem, I find it fantastic. You have a real skill of capturing your audience. I hope to read more of your work.
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