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This poem is really good. It is well written, it has very important topics in it that are most of the time just ignored. The poem helps to see life a bit clearer and it helps with the topics that are usually ignored. I think a lot of people should read it.

'To choose to turn your life around before it is too late and there is no life left to turn around.' this spoke to me personally....the poem is very well written and truely exciting.

'To choose to turn your life around before it is too late and there is no life left to turn around.' this spoke to me personally....the poem is very well written and truely exciting.

Nice piece. You got to be a little bit of everything. Now a days, you have to be all or nothing and that’s not how life is. Life throws curve balls and you need to adjust

all I have learnt from this poem is to live in peace.Everyone really NEEDS to read it. I love it!!!

Like Kipling's IF, a very deep poem

Well rounded poem. Touches on just about every part of being human. Offers a piece of inspiration for everyone. I would enjoy reading more from the author.

I love this poem it is based on reality and what is happening World wide.

This poem speaks to everyone individually, it's talks abt us being mindful of us doing something positive without the negatives,we have to be true w ourselves

What a poem I loved the phrase that says "To have fun in this life, without addiction, attachment or desperate clinginess" with this four shields you can have a very beautiful life.

Lovely sharing! I could say that this is such a graceful way of expressing it!

I like the words, 'To be at war in the material world, without losing inner peace' and 'To do, without trying' in the poem. They indicate the deeper truths of life. This is an expression of mature thinking and a well-built inner personality. An original piece of work!

This poem is very good it's talk's about real life of discipline and success

Truly inspiring indeed.

I love it .Its very educational and motivating