FEAR

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kavi_shree
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FEAR

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FEAR

FOR THE WHOLE OF OUR LIVES,
WE FEAR EVERYTHING.
FEAR OF THE PAST,
CRUMBLING OUR PRESENT.
ERASING OUR BETTER FUTURE.

FEAR OF FUTURE,
SHAKING OUR CONSTANT PRESENT.
ERASING OUR BETTER PAST.
WE BECOME DELUSIONAL OF FEAR.

FEAR,THAT SHATTERS
YOUR ONLY CONFIDENCE.
FEAR,THAT BREAKS
YOUR ONLY JOY.
FEAR,THAT DROPS
YOUR ONLY HOPE.

OF ALL THESE FEAR,
FEAR YOUR INNER SELF,
FEAR YOUR SIN,
TO BECOME FEARLESS!
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Post by Simona Dimitrova »

Wow, that hits hard in my heart... I love it! I like this type of poetry, but I just cannot create one. So congrats sounds awesome!
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I like how you've broken down the types of fear affecting our lives. And the most interesting fears of them all are fear of my inner self and fear of my sin.
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Intriguing!! Fear is like a poison that kill us.
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Post by bookklub »

Well wrapped-up. The last stanza is just too true. Bravo.
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Post by Lopee »

I love how the meaning of fear is broken down for people to understand in this poem, Fear, human being fear literally everything in this life and you've shown us the real meaning of fear in this poem. I really commend your efforts.. please keep it up 👍
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