Show me your naked pain

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Ma Leonarda Castañares
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this poem captured my soul.
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Calista Ngozi Uzokwe
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The poem appears to be a celebration of sincerity and a rejection of social pressure to constantly project a particular image to the outside world.
Lovely.
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Bernadeth Limbauan
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I loveeeee it!🥰
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