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Show me your naked pain
Posted: 01 Sep 2021, 20:50
by Scott
I wrote this today.
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Show me your naked pain
Show me your soul in the nude
Show me the reality
Of what it means to be you
Strip away the polite lies
Strip away the protective mask
Strip away the stiff upper lip
Bare it on the tip of the past
Be here in our now
Be untethered, free
Be you
With me
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Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 02 Sep 2021, 01:14
by Deval Sodha
Beautiful
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 02 Sep 2021, 03:45
by John Arun Kumar
Wow Scott! You really are a great poet!!
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 02 Sep 2021, 03:54
by gali
A great and meaningful poem!
Your handwriting is beautiful!
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 02 Sep 2021, 05:49
by Ingrid Sanchez
It makes you feel like when you are first in love!
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 02 Sep 2021, 15:26
by Twesigye A
I love the rhythm in it
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 07 Sep 2021, 01:55
by Lucia Maredi
Beautiful ♡♡
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 18 Sep 2021, 21:40
by eman1013
I don't understand why all this sadness
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 19 Sep 2021, 01:03
by malvikaa32
Soo deep...
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 21 Nov 2021, 00:49
by Avishi
Short and precise with deep meanings. Nice poem.
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 09 Dec 2021, 16:47
by tarafarah7
Another great piece! Keep it up and thanks for sharing!
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 14 Dec 2021, 20:29
by Balebi Alexis
I am impressed about this poem, really it is amazing I can rate it 4/4. I like so much the way you are creating poem. In brief, I am influenced about your work, I have to be inspired about you to become a greater author and publish books as you because in me, I have the talents and I am passionated about reading books OnlineBookClub website.
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 14 Dec 2021, 21:21
by Ashley Knight
I absolutely love this. Very inspiring for me.
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 15 Dec 2021, 01:40
by Richard Phiri 3
Simple and straightforward but it makes you think.. great creativity
Re: Show me your naked pain
Posted: 15 Dec 2021, 04:20
by Ihuoma03
If everyone could embrace the message of this poem, the world will be a better place. We all need to drop the charade of smiles and come out clean to ourselves. It will be a lot easier to relate with one another.
Thank you for this poem, Scott. Really beautiful.