In Another World

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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Glenis Ellis-Green
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Wow. You were right. It is sad indeed.
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This poem is great, but I found it to be extremely sad.
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This poem beautifully captures the poignant reality of paths not taken and lives not lived together. It's a haunting reflection on the 'what ifs' that linger in the corners of our memories, shaping our sense of loss and longing.
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You skillfully capture the deepest and most personal feelings and beautifully convey your emotions through their words.
The melancholic tone successfully paints a vivid picture of the sadness experienced.
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But I believe in the world that awaits us...more real than here. If we're with someone for any length of time, chances are that we'll experience these emotions.... but still, beautiful thinking.
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