I'll write you a poem,

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Tim_Cerullo
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I'll write you a new poem
That you can read from time to time
A tale of how we could be
In a world where you are mine.
Our feet could take us anywhere,
Our hands still tethered together,
Playing is the radiant moonlight.
Just tell me what to write,
And I'll create everything you say.
I couldn't write us into forever,
If you let my mind run wild.
I could write us into kisses at sunset,
As the sunshine fades away.
I could write us into all wonders,
That you've never dreamt of living.
But the saddest part of writing,
Is that I can never write you into loving me.
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Post by Brett Linette »

I did not see those last two lines coming. I think those last two lines made the poem, but then again, those last two lines wouldn't have meant so much if it wasn't for the lines leading up to them.

Nice job!
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