Magical World

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
Post Reply
User avatar
cja123
Posts: 2
Joined: 12 Nov 2021, 15:34
Currently Reading:
Bookshelf Size: 0

Magical World

Post by cja123 »

Fallen dreams
Broken dreams
Generation bleeds

The next too will breath
The Air not clean
The water grin

The worst will be
For some to live
The rest deceased

The earth once green
Now left to bleed
No air to breath

Let's fight for this
One chance to live
The future to dream
Top
User avatar
Brett Linette
Posts: 368
Joined: 19 May 2021, 02:18
Favorite Author: Edgar Allan Poe
Currently Reading:
Bookshelf Size: 82
Reviewer Page: onlinebookclub.org/reviews/by-brett-linette.html
Latest Review: ACED. by Shea Rose
fav_author_id: 4642

Post by Brett Linette »

I like how the idealism of the title contrasts with the bleakness of the poem.

Nice job!
Latest Review: ACED. by Shea Rose
Top
Post Reply

Return to “Creative Original Works: Poetry”