Not my days

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Rudy-Restless
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Not my days

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I’m sad and I’m mad
And I’m mad that I’m sad
Im sad that you left and I’m mad that I can’t
Stuck in this dream
and I’m screaming for peace
While praying that my voice might reach the deceased
Looking for a path that my feet won’t reach
In a fight for a beat that my heart won’t keep
Destined for greatness but life’s so weak
That we’re destined to break ‘cause the climb’s so steep
Less than afraid ‘cause your mind’s so steeped
In the rage and the pain that you find no sleep
Im mad and I’m sad
I’m sad that I’m mad
Mad that you left and you can’t come back
Sad that we grieve so passionately
These tears aren’t cheap but you’re finally free
Faced with the pain we replace it with blame
And it’s selfish and vain but I wish we could trade
Far too late for confessions and shame
So I count my blessings
Not my days
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Mmm-hmm, Interesting. Getting over the feeling of losing someone can be difficult, and then we are left with no choice, but to move on. Good job Rudy.
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