Beneath my mask

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Yemialex
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Beneath my mask

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Even In the darkest moon 🌚
Beneath it hides me
Awaiting your return
You seeing just a knife 🔪 in my chest but you can’t see the thousands Swords ⚔️ beneath that knife
I wish you could be my long lost shadow so you could understand my pains 😔
maybe then my heart won’t leave to take a nap
Today tonight😩
Was my depressed day 😔
But still couldn’t see through even when I tried using my fake mask to hide the pains again😭😭
am your clown🤡
Am going to my ocean bed
That got wet with my plug red eyes😪
I hope today doesn’t photocopy yesterday🙏

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Ojaay1995
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Post by Ojaay1995 »

:cry2: :cry2: So sad, literally it’s so amazing some still hide there pains with a smiling face
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Post by Yemialex »

Like right and there is no one to share that pain with
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Post by POETIC PACIFIC »

So sad and emotional.Great poetry and expressions.
a musical mind!
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I feel for u...
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