Missing the moment

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Missing the moment

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We tried to eat the fruit
Before the time was ripe
And instead tried to bite
On fruit too tart and hard
'Tis mushy now and marred
And time the way has barred
Back to the moment,
The time the fruit was ripe
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I like it. It is funny the things one picks to write. Sometimes I wonder if they pick us instead of the other way around.
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Leslie Kunde wrote: ↑27 Sep 2022, 17:34 I like it. It is funny the things one picks to write. Sometimes I wonder if they pick us instead of the other way around.
Thank you. I wonder that sometimes too.
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Thank you for sharing this. This will have me pondering much today.
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Sherry Barrow wrote: ↑28 Sep 2022, 06:19 Thank you for sharing this. This will have me pondering much today.
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