Sleepless

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Kavita Shah
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Sleepless

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Sleepless
It's time to sleep. The sun is down, the stars are bright, everything is sound but not my mind.
It is clever. It is glowing
It is thinking, it is rolling
Endless hurdles, endless materials,
Thoughts that are let go seem to fill the empty void
No pain could be felt as I try to make sense of them, they're only for a reason to make me sleepless.

One reason is I am no poet, other is that it's night time and I am sleepless. So thanks for reading. :angelic-little:
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Post by hgmira »

:D Haha I think it’s great
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:agree-to-disagree: :agree-to-disagree: :ditto: :ditto: :ditto: :ditto: :congratualtions-smiley: :good-luck-smiley: :good-luck-smiley:
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Post by Leslie Kunde »

Lol, I can relate to this. Then trying to write when I am tired never works!
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Post by Saiili »

Haha goodnight to all who have read this poem, we all have that moment.
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