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Sweater Weather

Posted: 15 Dec 2022, 18:15
by MnRen91
Stuck in the house
with no place to go.

If you were here
I wouldn't feel so alone.

But you chose to leave
I couldn't make you stay.

All I have of you is this sweater
and it's starting to fray.

Re: Sweater Weather

Posted: 20 Dec 2022, 18:05
by Saiili
The poetry is direct and easy to understand, however there is a lack of symbolism in there; there is only a few line where the readers can rethink and reflect.