Would I?

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Would I?

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If all the beautiful flowers
Were suddenly gone
And only you were left
Would I pick you
Or let you grow wild and free?
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Post by Ealasaid »

Very interesting. Makes one certainly think.
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Thanks. I'm not a poet by any stretch, but just had this rattling around in my head. Dunno why.
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Nice! :handgestures-thumbup:
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Thank you! :oops:
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You are too modest. That is a beautiful little gem. I like it very much.
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Thank you so much!
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Very nice, Pasha :)
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Thanks, Gravy. :)
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I think it would die eventually...
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I suppose that's the paradox....
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That's gorgeous. I really like it.
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Thank you!
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Post by stoppoppingtheP »

Wow. I really did like it. Those few sentences capture quite a bit of depth in its meaning.

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i have seen a man wanting to weep
but
instead
beat his heart until it was unconscious.

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Thank you very much!
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