Addiction

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Fooxie Darkbloom
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Addiction

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It calls to me
Like the sun calls to the plants
The lone sound
So sweet
That draws me in
Singing to my soul
Drowning in pleasure
Always coming back for more
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Post by VanessaB16 »

I really like this!!! It has a very melodic kind of flow :D
"And what shoulder, & what art. Could twist the sinews of thy heart?"
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Very interesting take on addiction. :eusa-think:
~ occupare fati suffocavit

I will both lay me down in peace, and sleep: for Thou, LORD, only makest me dwell in safety. ~ Psalms 4:8
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