Bills

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Abigail09
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Bills

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Bills are meant to be paid
Bills are connected to our lives
Bills can make us happy and
As well make us sad
Extra miles are taken when bills want to be settled
Bills make peolple slaves to money,
Not because they want to but,
because they have to
Bills can't talk,
bills don't have legs,
bills don't have hands
But....
bills pierce our hearts even more than human.
Bills; man's friend and foe.
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This is awesome. I love how you personify bills as being able to ruin us even though they're just a slip.of paper. Well done. :)

-- 14 Jun 2015, 22:13 --
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Post by Abigail09 »

johappy wrote:This is awesome. I love how you personify bills as being able to ruin us even though they're just a slip.of paper. Well done. :)

-- 14 Jun 2015, 22:13 --
.Thanks :D
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