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Johnston316
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The best ever I have seen
Is the sun shining in the sky so serene
The beauty of the world can be so grand
And the happiness that it gives me is hard to understand

The beauty of life is so divine
A reminder of how wonderful it can be sometimes
Peace of mind and a heart of gold
A reminder of how much beauty our world can hold

The best ever I have seen
Is the beauty of the world in its true form
The joy and the happiness of being alive
A reminder of how precious life can be sometimes

The best ever I have seen
Is the beauty of the world in its true form?
The joy, the peace, and the happiness of being alive
A reminder of how precious life can be.
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Elizabeth Sprinkle
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Post by Elizabeth Sprinkle »

This is beautiful.
It really is so hard to understand that feeling of happiness, but you explain it so thoughtfully! There is something so amazing about the world and the weathers! I drive in country roads, feeling the sunshine warm my face, car windows down and the smell of rain is in the air. These are the moments that I am truly grateful to be alive, and you show it magnificently in this poem.
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