God, for me.
- Esther Godwin Ogechi
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God, for me.
It adds to the pain.
The feeling drives me insane,
It's frustrating.
My pillow is wet,
Like it was met by rain.
I want to scream,
My heart is aching,
I can feel headaches in my brain.
I wish to talk to someone,
But I conclude already,
Before opening my mouth,
That it'd be in vain.
That's when I rush back to You,
And You run toward me,
And meet me in my lane.
You alone can tell,
How frustrated I am,
And how much it drains,
Trying to explain.
So, You don't even ask questions,
You just welcome me,
With a big embrace.
Tears fall from my face,
You seem to know,
Exactly how to respond,
To my troubles and craze.
You kiss my head softly,
And immediately calms,
The storm by your Grace.
It's why, when I start feeling,
Misunderstood, confused,
Or alone in my maze,
I can always look back at You,
And know that with You,
I have a place.
Only you understand perfectly,
The pain in my tears.
- Hazel Mae Bagarinao
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It's good to have someone who you can trust in times of sorrow, whether it's a family member or a friend. This poem sounds like based on a true experience. I don't know how to write a poem. But yours is wonderful. Keep it up!I can always look back at You,
And know that with You,
I have a place.
- Esther Godwin Ogechi
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Thank you.Hazel Mae Bagarinao wrote: โ04 Feb 2023, 03:08It's good to have someone who you can trust in times of sorrow, whether it's a family member or a friend. This poem sounds like based on a true experience. I don't know how to write a poem. But yours is wonderful. Keep it up!I can always look back at You,
And know that with You,
I have a place.
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- Esther Godwin Ogechi
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The comforter, and never changing indeed. I'm glad you found this worthwhile.Galactic Customs wrote: โ28 Feb 2023, 11:09 I think this was beautifully written! Nice work. Life can be so confusing until we just look to the one who is never changing. And he is always there.
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- Esther Godwin Ogechi
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Thank you.Immaculate Justina wrote: โ27 Mar 2023, 10:29 I can feel that there is more to this than meets the eye. Please keep this up, I love your work.
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