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Rain

Posted: 16 Jun 2015, 14:54
by Linaspjut
The constant pitter patter dripping on my doorstep
Trapping me in
Never ceasing to release me from myself
My nightmares coming to life engulfing me in my everyday life
Yet You learn to love rain
It allows you to weep and sob
Without the world hearing you
The drops from the sky match some what seemlessly
With the drops from my bloodshot eyes

Re: Rain

Posted: 16 Jun 2015, 14:57
by Oliviachan
Finally a poem that capture the essence from rain that could only be brought to life through poetry! Job well done future poet of America

Re: Rain

Posted: 18 Jun 2015, 21:03
by Emmers00
Lovely work

Re: Rain

Posted: 19 Jun 2015, 01:14
by DATo
Very nice!

Re: Rain

Posted: 19 Jun 2015, 22:35
by Linaspjut
Thank you that means a whole lot. I hope that my poems will speak to people in a way that ordinary words cannot.

Re: Rain

Posted: 19 Jun 2015, 23:24
by Levi
Very cool, thank you

Re: Rain

Posted: 22 Oct 2015, 15:47
by stoppoppingtheP
I like the description of the last two lines.