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Mirror mirror on the wall

Posted: 16 Jun 2015, 20:54
by Oliviachan
Mirror mirror on the wall
Mirror mirror do you recall?
All the warnings reflected at me
Was I blind?
Could I not see?
Mirror mirror I should've listened
When I was young and I still glistened
Mirror mirror I beg you please
Forgive me and please just seize

Re: Mirror mirror on the wall

Posted: 22 Oct 2015, 15:52
by stoppoppingtheP
Nice. Written with the same rhyme scheme as its original, but much more humorous. :D

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Nice. Written with the same rhyme scheme as its original, but much more humorous. :D

Re: Mirror mirror on the wall

Posted: 04 Nov 2015, 17:01
by Leahaldrich
I love it. I used to love looking in the mirror and now it's like getting on the scale. I only do it when forced.

Re: Mirror mirror on the wall

Posted: 04 Jan 2016, 14:19
by AMDRAKE
Nice. I think everyone in the world can relate to this poem. We all have lost dreams taken by time and wrong turns and we wish we would have listened to our former, youthful selves.

Re: Mirror mirror on the wall

Posted: 17 Jan 2016, 00:43
by DarkestbeforeDawn
I think that this poem is about growing older and looking at the regrets in the mirror. But I don't understand what the speaker is expecting the mirror to do with the command to "seize"? It's not very clear.

Re: Mirror mirror on the wall

Posted: 01 Feb 2016, 20:14
by Sarah_Khan
Great poem! It's fun to read and excellently written.