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Fire fire
All around me
Fire fire
All I can see
Fire fire
Its all in my mind
Fire fire
Wish you would be kind
Fire fire
Your words are to me
Fire fire
Consuming me

I like it, though I feel like you could probably do more with it. I would almost take out "Its" in the line of Its all in my mind....then you would have the repetition of all along with the repetition of fire fire.

Thank you I am glad for the advice