Suicide

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Oliviachan
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Suicide

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Bid farewell
Make amends
Till I see you when it ends
Pull the trigger
Close the door
Till the light you see no more
Peace alas has been achieved
The only mercy she received
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Linaspjut
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The national suicide prevention hotline is +18002738255
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@Oliviachan
Beautiful and deeply touching
We fade away, but vivid in our eyes
A world is born again that never dies.
- My Home by Clive James
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