Ouote/Poetry

Use this forum to post poetry that you have written. This is for getting comments and constructive feedback. This is for original, creative works. You must post the actual text, no links. Only one poem per topic please.
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faithorg
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"Without the depth of pain in human life we begin again in Eden. Will hope then exist in perfect existence? reality present is depravity of a fall. Hope is our awareness that we have assurance we who are saved will live and love again in Eden.”
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What is 'Oute'?...
Hmmm it's nice and deep but I feel the poet can do better
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