Deep down

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Melyleen Shumba
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Deep down

Post by Melyleen Shumba »

Life is a pretty pity.
A dark pinky risky.
We are more like a brisky donkey .
But the reward is an itchy inky.
Thus , shall be called a dirty tricky.

Life is like a beast dressing.
Everyday we receive the dark East blessing.
There's always a black vision of breast pressing .
The desperate voices from the West crying .
Back home there's least frying .
Erecting vast dying.

Life is like dragons playing chase.
More like hungry quolls eating not getting fate.
Spinning in the woods always running late.
Brown yellow sweat cleansing the longing face.
In the end we are given a pleasing curse .

Life is an angry smile.
Working on the prestigious' pantry tile.
No wine always reading the vintry file.
We're urged to have an entry style.
More like eating a gory bile.

Life is a white fight
Walking alone in the quiet night
All we need is just a bright light
Life is like a piece of cake cut
In the end will all fall apart
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