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The feeling inside

Posted: 06 Apr 2023, 05:26
by Maariyah Saumtally
You have this feeling,
This feeling that talks,
It says go on believing,
No matter what your faults,
It says you feel this is right,
And you know this is wrong,
And no teacher no preacher or friend Can decide,
What truly is is right,
Like the voice deep inside,

And When you come to that path,
And you don't know what to do ,
You look to that voice,
To make a choice,
To Lead you to light,
To help win the battles you fight,
To show you the right way,
So you can be proud of your day,

It says make your own choices,
Though you may not know,
Where the path truly goes,
It may never show,
You must take your step,
And learn to accept,
Rather than ache,
For the step you didn't take,

Listen to that feeling,
That feeling that talks,
It says go on believing,
No matter what your faults,
Make the right choices
And listen to the right voices
And only then will you know
Where the path truly goes

Re: The feeling inside

Posted: 11 Apr 2023, 06:25
by Milena Stoykova
It is very nice! I like it!

Re: The feeling inside

Posted: 21 Apr 2023, 06:07
by Esta PenaStoutt
This is a poem of understanding life. It takes you into yourself and let you understand your own energy and how to utilize self control understanding your own powerful self.

Re: The feeling inside

Posted: 22 Apr 2023, 22:49
by Rosesbookpicks
I feel like I related to this poem! It's like voicing your opinions and speaking up if I'm not wrong. Anyway, nice poem and you should write more poems like this:D