The End

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The End

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Darkness engulfs the earth,
As the sun fades away,
All life bids adieu,
The end of the world at play.

The trees stand bereft of leaves,
The flowers don't bloom anymore,
The creatures no longer stir,
Only silence at the core.

The skies have lost their color,
The stars don't shine so bright,
The moon is but a memory,
All that's left is the endless night.

The sea has lost its waves,
The rivers have become still,
The world that we once knew,
Is now but a memory, nil.

No more laughter, no more joy,
Only tears of sorrow remain,
Death has claimed all life,
Leaving behind a world in pain.

The emptiness stretches forth,
As far as the eye can see,
A soulless world, deathly,
Where nothing else can be.

This is the fate of all that lives,
This is the end that we'll meet,
When life can breathe no more,
Death and darkness shall weep.
For I know the thought I have for you, says the Lord, thoughts of peace, not of evil, to give you an expected end.Jeremiah 29:11
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It's a nice poem! Although, it sad but it was really nice:) But you should keep writing poems!
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Nielly Rose Sutacio wrote: โ†‘22 Apr 2023, 22:44 It's a nice poem! Although, it sad but it was really nice:) But you should keep writing poems!
I will for sure! I was trying to test my writing in another theme (something dark) other than love.
For I know the thought I have for you, says the Lord, thoughts of peace, not of evil, to give you an expected end.Jeremiah 29:11
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This is wonderful notwithstanding the somber mood!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
The gift turned out to be a curse. They killed him with kindness.
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Esther Godwin Ogechi wrote: โ†‘17 May 2023, 15:16
Nielly Rose Sutacio wrote: โ†‘22 Apr 2023, 22:44 It's a nice poem! Although, it sad but it was really nice:) But you should keep writing poems!
I will for sure! I was trying to test my writing in another theme (something dark) other than love.
That's nice! Good luck:)
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Nielly Rose Sutacio wrote: โ†‘18 May 2023, 07:10
Esther Godwin Ogechi wrote: โ†‘17 May 2023, 15:16
Nielly Rose Sutacio wrote: โ†‘22 Apr 2023, 22:44 It's a nice poem! Although, it sad but it was really nice:) But you should keep writing poems!
I will for sure! I was trying to test my writing in another theme (something dark) other than love.
That's nice! Good luck:)
For I know the thought I have for you, says the Lord, thoughts of peace, not of evil, to give you an expected end.Jeremiah 29:11
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Nielly Rose Sutacio wrote: โ†‘18 May 2023, 07:10
Esther Godwin Ogechi wrote: โ†‘17 May 2023, 15:16
Nielly Rose Sutacio wrote: โ†‘22 Apr 2023, 22:44 It's a nice poem! Although, it sad but it was really nice:) But you should keep writing poems!
I will for sure! I was trying to test my writing in another theme (something dark) other than love.
That's nice! Good luck:)
Thanks
For I know the thought I have for you, says the Lord, thoughts of peace, not of evil, to give you an expected end.Jeremiah 29:11
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This is nice. It's funny how this appeals to me. Please keep this up!
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