Being human

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PoorMonger
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Being human

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The knowing heart gets
Pulled apart - wanting anyway.
Being human hurts.
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Profoundly sad but beautiful :(
We fade away, but vivid in our eyes
A world is born again that never dies.
- My Home by Clive James
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Being alive probably hurts in general. The good, the bad, the ugly. Few days are entirely perfect or entirely awful. Would like to see a fuller version of this 'PoorMonger' :)
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Thanks for reading I'm glad you both enjoyed it.
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Always nice to get some striking themes to ponder.
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Short but sweet.
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Post by dreamwriter_reviews »

Has remarkable potential for a haiku.
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