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Being human

Posted: 07 Oct 2015, 21:06
by PoorMonger
The knowing heart gets
Pulled apart - wanting anyway.
Being human hurts.

Re: Being human

Posted: 08 Oct 2015, 05:14
by Fran
Profoundly sad but beautiful :(

Re: Being human

Posted: 09 Oct 2015, 10:35
by CzechTigg
Being alive probably hurts in general. The good, the bad, the ugly. Few days are entirely perfect or entirely awful. Would like to see a fuller version of this 'PoorMonger' :)

Re: Being human

Posted: 13 Oct 2015, 17:33
by PoorMonger
Thanks for reading I'm glad you both enjoyed it.

Re: Being human

Posted: 18 Oct 2015, 20:52
by CzechTigg
Always nice to get some striking themes to ponder.

Re: Being human

Posted: 04 Nov 2015, 17:03
by Leahaldrich
Short but sweet.

Re: Being human

Posted: 05 Feb 2016, 15:19
by dreamwriter_reviews
Has remarkable potential for a haiku.