Love

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Jesus Kilkim
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Love

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Is this how you feel?
Is this what you do?
This feeling is so real
And losing you was too
Now I'm in the dark
Feeling all alone
Cause I have no spark
Of love to keep me on

Now I deep and drowning
Sinking in this feeling
And you've gone away
Did you really have to leave me
Still wishing you coulda stayed
Now there is no more we
I remember you were mine
And absolutely lovely
Your love was so divine
And our lives were so free

We're all dotted in a line
With sh*t upon our course
Your crazy still it's fine
Don't you ever feel remorse

I loved you, I needed you
Swore to never let you go
You hugged me and kisses flew
We just went with the flow

Lost Love
By Kilkim
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