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Stampede

Posted: 05 Nov 2015, 21:03
by stanley
Stampede

I looked to hope's horizon for the dawn of favorable signs

Only to see ambling toward me

And my garden of tender balloons,

A herdsey, grinning, bristly bunch

Of pugnacious porcupines.

Re: Stampede

Posted: 05 Nov 2015, 22:37
by rssllue
Yikes! :scared-eek:

Re: Stampede

Posted: 06 Nov 2015, 05:42
by DATo
Your poems capture ideas in both a profound and yet comic book sort of way. There is a little bit of the feel of Lewis Caroll's poem Jabberwocky about it. .... I LIKE IT !

More please?

Re: Stampede

Posted: 10 Nov 2015, 16:35
by stanley
thanks for reading and your kind comment.