Strange feeling

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Abduljabbar Zakari Yusuf
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Strange feeling

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If words could echo out the sounds in my heart
Directed by my brain
A feeling strange and demanding
Rare and unique
A feeling of desire beyond anticipation
A feeling of constant recurrence
Hard to forget about
A feeling
Feeling of love
Traces with no origin
But strange enough to want to be forever
Love
A feeling of distraction
No matter how hard concentration is tried
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This heartfelt poem beautifully captures the complex and powerful emotions of love, its lingering presence, and its ability to both captivate and distract.
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