What happens to the person?

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Disha B Kayastha
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What happens to a person?
When he struggles and faces a lot of difficulties,
Does he feel tired,
or worn out ,
or sad at the end of every day?
Does his hopes and wills vapourizes into an unknown place?
Just like water vaporizes in the vast big sky?
What happens to the person?
Does his body feels empty,
Or tired but not his soul?
Does his hopes and wills become strong,
By each passing day?
Or does his mind goes blank,
When not a single fruit bears in his tree,
After so much of hard work?
Or does he still hopes for the best?
What happens to the person?
What happens when he thinks to end it all?
At just one thought that he couldn't take it anymore.
Does not he feel scared at all?
Does not he think about it once more?
Does not he hopes till the last breadth and a will to - 'hold on'?
What happens to the person?
What happens if he chooses hopes and dreams instead of despair and sorrow?
When he accepts that failure cones first and success later.
When he chooses light of knowledge as well as the dark-bitter truth of life,
Does it makes him a bravado of life?
What happens to that person?
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That person would become the master of life. disappointment after hard work, losing all your energy and still not getting what you want, having desires and dreams but not fulfilling a single one of them, and most importantly facing a lot of difficulties and waiting for the fruit of success, It all needs a person who can accept them and go on with life. what happens to the person who gives up? well, he would be a great loser. and what happens to the person who holds on to his hope till the last second? in the end, he would become the master of life. Nice poem by the way :wink:.
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