Breaking point

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joshua govans
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Breaking point

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Breaking point

The earth cracks the lava poors, the ground shakes to let out a roar, the hole is deep, dare to peek at the core, the clouds are grey stay away from the storm, oceans dry, from shore to shore, Sky filled with dust from the ocean floor, emotions torn, hatred formed regret swarms, the body of mass at last worn, the point before it gives, when it's purpose is out lived, and out dated, unappreciated, the insides are deteriorated, irritated, from years of patience, it was never perfect but what was given was driven to feel worthless, with out a purpose, to give away if you scratch the surface,
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