YOU ARE

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Ndaziwa Matick
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You are the best doctor
Who could assess my disease
Without me telling you with words
You fed me
While the world hid it's face
You defied odds
Surmounted obstacles
Just to raise me

You are the best tour guide
On a journey so unpredictable and winding
You taught me the right way
Like a compass
You guided me with your advice
That impregnated my ears
Making my brain to gaze at what the word has
I have Passed Through The Corridors Of This Lifetime
Still Sticking To Your Caution
Of how fair and foul the world is

You are the best sacrifice
You sleep with an empty stomach
Suffer the pangs of hunger
As you put yourself are aside
For the sake of mine;
You pay millions to my school
yet chiperon I slaps you at dusk
You wear tattered clothes

You are my best friend
you help me when I am in trouble
you encourage me when I fail
I wish we could dance together
When minutes of glory came
Yes,I consider you my second God
You are indeed all in all

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Your words beautifully express deep gratitude and admiration for someone who has been a source of support, guidance, sacrifice, and friendship.
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