Life of a legend

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Pragya Pandey 3
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Life of a legend

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This is anold piece that I have written around some 15 -16 yrs ago for self motivation n vent out my own frustrations. But do check out give your comments on it.


LIFE OF A LEGEND

Life is a mess,
Feeling distress,
May be there is a hole,
In my mind,body or soul
Don't know what to take ,
When I have no decision to make.
Swinging in a Dilema's dance,
Fate have left me with no chance

Though the things looks pretty well,
I know somewhere GOD has misspell
Don't know what was wrong in my deeds
Or what courage do I need?
If anyone is ever going to tell
Why life is looking like a hell ?
What to do ?How-to handle?
My mind is all in tangle .
Bound in so many shackles,
Perhaps it's more than i could tackle.

And yet,loosing is what I can't stand,
I am going to give life a second hand.
Fate had played enough role,
It's time to take back control.
I will have to challenge the prophecy
How could a legend leave without a legacy?
And who knows,if i just take this dare,
All the struggle turns out to be just a nightmare.
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This poignant reflection on life's challenges captures the essence of resilience and the determination to overcome adversity.
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