Flawsomeness

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Esther Godwin Ogechi
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Flawsomeness

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Flawsomeness, a term so rare,
A perfect blend of flaws and flare.
An imperfection that shines so bright,
A beauty that's just out of sight.

It's not about being flawless and perfect,
But about embracing your flaws and defects.
For in those imperfections lies the key,
To unlock the potential that's within thee.

For every flaw is a story to tell,
A lesson learned, a life lived well.
It's a reminder that we're all human,
And that perfection is just an illusion.

Embrace your quirks and your flaws,
For they make you unique, without any pause.
And let your flawsomeness shine through,
For it's what makes you, truly you.
For I know the thought I have for you, says the Lord, thoughts of peace, not of evil, to give you an expected end.Jeremiah 29:11
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Post by Emma Jane Grey »

This is such a sweet poem! Nicely done! Love the word flawsomeness as well - I hope it catches on haha
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Absolutely love this!!
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Post by Mira Cle »

Your poems are really nice! I love this so much. I wish I could write something too😭😭😭
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