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Sathwika Ammu
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Crush

Post by Sathwika Ammu »

Boy o boy! Who are you?
Though being distant from me
You make my eyes shutter and my heart flutter
Making me daydream while I close my eyes

Boy o boy! Aren't you tired?
In your absence I think of you
In your presence you grab my attention
You may be ordinary for others
but for me you are extraordinary.

Boy o boy! What is this?
You remind me of magnet
coz I'm being attracted to u
I'm afraid to look into your eyes
Coz I might lose myself in them

Boy o boy! My system is collapsing
As I see you, my heart beats faster
And my brain stops functioning
Now that I've seen you,
Life without you seems pointless


Boy o Boy! I've always been a confident girl
But to talk to you I become a coward.
I don't know how you feel about yourself
But I just recognised that
Oh boy I ve been crushing on you...

I'm writing this to let u know how I feel
Not knowing how you will deal
Oh boy! whatever your reply might be
But thankyou for making me feel
these memorable experiences
From the person loving you
To the person being loved...
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