Super Woman(Happy Mother's Day)

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Abigail09
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Super Woman(Happy Mother's Day)

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Even when she was underestimated,
even when she was given little,
even when she was being maltreated,
even when he showed no concern,
even when she had the chance to flee for her life,
She endured , took it all in
She surpassed their expectations ,
She made more out of the little given to her,
She took extra miles for the ones she loved.
She turned out to be strong.
She is my Super Woman.
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Very nice. 8)
~ occupare fati suffocavit

I will both lay me down in peace, and sleep: for Thou, LORD, only makest me dwell in safety. ~ Psalms 4:8
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Awwww this is beautiful!
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Thank you
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